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Monday, August 30, 2010

Eureka

Hello blogger i have a new poem for you today but before i get to that i want to shear some good new with you. I have been entering poetry contest on the Internet and one of the judges from a contest respond back to me and now my poem is in the semifinal's how great is that i could be published. The poem that i enter was called "MOTHER'S MESSAGE FROM ABOVE" you could check it out by reading one of my earlier post. Now here is my new poem tell me what you think.

I have an idea, I know
what to do. I can own my
own store or fish upon
the shore. I can sing
to a crowd or marry a king.
I can do so much, you just
watch and see. I have
an idea
, I know what to do.
I can be a guitar player or
even drop out of school. There
is so much I can do just
watch and see. But most of
all I just think I'll be me.

11 comments:

  1. Well, my English is not perfect and certainly not poetry.
    But if you like it you must continue.

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  2. Encouraging and inspiring poem. Makes me want to try something new. Congrats on the contest. Great news!!

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  3. Oh congratulation Shonda!!To get participate in a semi already concider qualified.
    That's why i believe in you,the best thing in our life is to be ourself..nice poem,love it:)

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  4. Shonda...this is yet another striking poem...very thoughtful. loved it...Keep it up and yes many congratulations for your poetic feat. My best wishes to you. Hope you win the contest :D

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  5. WOw thank you so much @robert,sun and bella, fazril, and aswani you have said so many kind words thank you so much for that. Also thank you for the congratulation on the contest

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  6. Congratulations on becoming a finalist.

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  7. Another Excellent poem keep up the great work shonda.

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  8. Thank you so much ron that's really nice to here

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  9. Ciaoo Shonda! How cooooool is that! Congrats and I can totally understand why you're in the semi-finals! Your poems are simply lovely! Keep it up!!

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  10. Thank you TJ thank really nice to here from you thank you so much for the congratulations

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